walking_forward: and Imma parrot (Come home and I'll be there)
walking_forward ([personal profile] walking_forward) wrote in [community profile] tales_100 2012-02-01 02:35 am (UTC)

I love how you have this presence of Casey that Raven doesn't let go of as well as his discomfort to actually engage in anything intimate.

It also actually gives me this image of Raven's cold, heartless, body feeling mechanical compared to a warm heart beating body. Which makes it more depressing. X/

Good job.

Post a comment in response:

This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting