muscle_wizard: (Sally // The Nightmare Before Christmas)
Toki ([personal profile] muscle_wizard) wrote in [community profile] tales_1002010-07-31 02:19 pm

Symphonia, Presea, Forgiveness

Title: Cannot
Author: [personal profile] muscle_wizard
Canon: Tales of Symphonia
Spoilers: Presea's Backstory
Characters/pairing: Presea Combatir
Rating: All Audiences
Warnings: None


She doesn't remember much, the years spent under the crystal's power blended into one another until they're nothing but a fine blur.

She knows that she was alive in the technical sense. She breathed, she blinked, she moved her foot forward and the other followed suit, taking her to places she doesn't remember but visited all the same.

She doesn't remember (so empty inside), and when she finally comes home, to take a look into a room she really sees for the first time in years she knows this too.

You can't ask for forgiveness from a pile of bones.
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[personal profile] cypher 2010-07-31 07:23 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, ouch. poor Presea. ♥
tg: (danbo&plucking daisies)

[personal profile] tg 2010-08-01 04:45 am (UTC)(link)
I love Presea, and man, this hurts. I really like it though--that last line delivers quite the punch.

[personal profile] vangirl 2010-08-01 05:17 am (UTC)(link)
oh, Presea. That bit about her father had me in near-tears when I first played through.

You did a wonderful job conveying the difference between living and well, being here. Body moving, but the soul just isn't there.
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[personal profile] threewalls 2010-08-29 02:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Ouch. The last line makes the drabble.