rainfall: A pair of hands holding an ornate teacup. The red fingernails and green shirt match the teacup's design. (teacups)
Rain ([personal profile] rainfall) wrote in [community profile] tales_100 2011-12-28 04:49 pm (UTC)

Pffftttt.

I think she could come to be happy in the castle but things would have to be different there. :|a As I wrote it, one of the things I thought was that, even though she grew up in the castle, it was never really her home. And it could become her home, if she came back to Zaphias feeling less adrift and helpless. I was thinking that feeling that way might be a subtle weight on her, one she didn't completely notice or articulate, but that losing it makes her feel free

and now I've said more than I wrote. :D

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